dear Judy


what a nice words u wrote!


u r right there is no places for optimism

light of eye

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what a nice words u wrote!

u r right there is no places for optimism

Dear friend , I am thankful for your passing here

accept my regards

Wel , u sound truly true when u say : pessimistic is real .. optimistic is imaginary ..

Every time i pick my pen to write somethin that's optimistic , I end up writin just another pessimistic poem ..

Anyway , I did like it , keep on goin , n by the way , I have written like 10 new poems , but am not gettin the chance to write them on pc n then post them here , but maybe soon !!!

Best regards ..

Evan

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Every time i pick my pen to write somethin that's optimistic , I end up writin just another pessimistic poem ..

by the way .. every time I try writing something hopeful , I feel that
it's somehow silly .. cause I know it is not real
but every now and then I do write some high spirit lines, though still few

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Anyway , I did like it , keep on goin , n by the way , I have written like 10 new poems , but am not gettin the chance to write them on pc n then post them here , but maybe soon !!!

now come on !! ten poems ?!! and still you had no chance to write not
even one on ur pc??!!

be honest .. aren't you saving them for the compitition??

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just kidding :)

I'm glad you liked the poem .. thanks for passing

Regards

very deep sense and so well choice of words
specially....

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When daggers of hatred were to shot your back
And made you draw your life in color black

I am now a new actor in a new play;
Where no feelings are needed .. no nothing to say,
No friends, no relatives, no human contact
As Soledad , alone, would survive
And keep my inner soul intact.

maybe you are right about being alone alittle...... that helps clearing human's soul
but as you know...... no body can live forever in loneliness....and forgiveness can renew
friendships ........ or you can keep looking for the truly friend and you will find him

I want to tell you that it took me about half an hour to find the meaning of "soledad"
and I found it in a spanish dictionary and it means "loneliness"
am I right!!!!

زيد الهبري

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maybe you are right about being alone alittle...... that helps clearing human's soul

Now this is exactly the loneliness I'm talking about
cause sometimes even when you are sorrounded by your intimate relations
you can't but feel alone .. but it is not a forever state .. it is temporary
to get away from problems .. and free ur mind a little from life's difficulties

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no body can live forever in loneliness....and forgiveness can renew
friendships ........ or you can keep looking for the truly friend and you will find him

and this is exactly what I do not mean by the poem
it's not that I'm not gonna forgive and that I'll chose to live alone forever
no at all!
it is only a matter of time to have the hope back again in the scene

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I want to tell you that it took me about half an hour to find the meaning of "soledad"
and I found it in a spanish dictionary and it means "loneliness"
am I right!!!!

yes you are right Zaid .. it is a spanish word
I'm glad you were interested in the poem enough to search for its meaning
and by the way I hate the word loneliness so much that's why
I replaced it by its spanish equavilent ..

Thanks alot Zaid for passing .. and sharing ur opinion in the poem
hope to read more of ur comments

My Best Regards

When words lose their way ..and suddenly become weak
a new road I'll be going.. the silence I'll seek

Yet the hope is not dead .. there is hope still
only in silence, in Soledad and the feelings I'll kill

To preserve my heart's core from a new tragedy to come
I'll be closing its door and loneliness alone is welcome
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The Silence

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every time , they cut u very deep.. till one day there ll be no more place for other hurt 

Now this is what I haven't  at all taken into account
when you are in such a state you do not think of its consequences

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nd Silent Hope ll be ur real name  ….  i m sure this name suit u best for what ve u done to the foreign forum nd its members …

I'm really speechless .. !!
to be honest >> I like this name "Silent Hope" much more
cause deep within I'm not of the pessimistic type and I keep searching
for a gleam of light no matter how gloomy the scene is

I'm very thankful for your unique replay
actually I can't be more impressed!!

Thanks

My Best Regards