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.Three Heavenly Rays


SILVER

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Three Heavenly Rays

06-06-2008 06:45 PM



'Three Heavenly Rays'



Where the lamp light was slight,
I lifted my pen and started to write.
Aiming to hover beyond my choky border
To reach the sky that looks like powder.
Between the four walls me body I set,
But no words to my feelings can be fit;
Nor the ink of the globe was able to fill
The papers of my life, Even when it went as hell.
Up the court of my balcony I stopped my feet,
While the sky was clear like a clean grey sheet.
Then betwixt the two high narrow walls
I marked her. As if she was nearly to fall
With her three rays reaching the land,
Cried for my pen to engrave this by My hand!
Yes three rays. One mixed with solely a star.
I wished I was there, but I savvy it is too far.
Ohh heavy thoughts! Keeps knocking me down,
Mutating my enchanter smile into everlasting frown!
But naïve thoughts: "It'll be far beyond your will"
You know who I am. You know what the Name can tell.
Hence let your ugly burden slip away;
Since we are the birds of Prey!



(Copyrights © SILVER)
2008-05-23
Free verse
3 A.M






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رد مشاركة : Three Heavenly Rays

07-06-2008 01:10 PM



Hello SILVER
It will be really unfair just to pass and
say : what a beautiful poem
thanks

without saying what I got from it
It is really difficult to interpret the meaning of your poem easily
however, I will try
I think that this guy in the poem (and it is very likely the poet_SILVER) is going
through a state of sadness or depression
nevertheless, he is hopeful and willful to go out of this state


اقتباس
Aiming to hover beyond my choky border


also I actually read the meaning of rays as HOPE rays
and clearly -at least to me- "heavy thoughts" overcome this guy at the end
and I still do not have a clue to the identity of "she"...I tried to figure it out
but could not reach to an answer

excuse me If I distorted what you mean by your poem
but this is what I got out of my mind that is full of Drama these days

Now
I will say thanks alot for your difficult
yet beautiful poem



You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful, you're leaving me breathless

And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I'm thankful for the life we've made
.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..



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رد مشاركة : Three Heavenly Rays

07-06-2008 02:24 PM




Good day Ms Judy

Well First let me thank and send my apology to you

For making you busy (Not in the Proper Time)

In reading and analyzing this poem.

To be frank, I hesitated before I decided to expose this poem,

Because Neither mind nor time is suitable for Such things,

But things went Out of my hands.

Now back to our Poem:

It is clear that the Man in the poem is Someone, whom you know,

And this poem was the first Subjective poem demonstrated

Here in this exquisite forum.

You got it right when you mentioned the state of sadness and

Depression; in the opposite side, you get it wrong by saying:

"To me- heavy thoughts overcome this guy"

Because the Man in the poem is Indestructible one, and this is

Clear in a lot of occasions in the poem especially the last line.

The last and not the least, the 'She' plus 'Rays' is up to the

Reader, I would rather keep them for myself.

One final point, you did not distorted anything in the poem

Rather You touched it by your expert hands.

Thank you fellow, for being the first participant.

Best of luck in Drama




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