peace upon you
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Just for your records .. after 10 days from today NO MORE votes will be allowed ..
i didn't realize that ! maybe because i was in rush and maybe for something else
first of all i'd like to thank Judy , White Jasmine , Merna , Mahmod , and my the most confusing discusser Mazin The cominer from Balkh ! and my dear friend Bassel
in fact i tried to guess who is poet of this poetry on every poem and i found that my judgment was the same like what White Jasmine said .. i think that i knew the poem of Merna , Mazin and Mahmod
i liked Bassel's vote
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Childish fear
because .. it confuses me .. and really I did not got it all ..
and I need some explanation .. from its writer ..
yet , I felt that there is a secret behind !!!
i think that too .. it looks that the writer was in the climax of his sady emotions when he/she wrote that peace !! it's spectacular
but I don't vote for it
about
WHISPERS IN THE NIGHT it's really nice but i seemed to me classical and old fashionated a little bit ! it's just a feel of mine though it's really very very good but i felt something like that i've read it thousands of times in my life
what i really found upnormally iching my feelings is this:
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Living in dreams would never come true
That’s how it seemed when I was with you
That faded flower you’d never seen
And you didn’t care, you were so mean
You kept telling me I’m an angel when I cry
And now you’d drown with the tears in my eye
wish not to hear such a thing in my life it's a catastrophe
finally i think that i admired them all ... but i will follow my feelings and vote for:
"Drowned …with Tears of an Angel"
my best wishes