StopAmTop

Hi
first of all nice words..

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Like a shadow .. counting days ..
Sleeping not ,, crying always ..
Preparing the Self ,, to tell  a truth ..
No matter , harsh it were or a smooth ..

I wanna ask you a question Basel??

I found in it a love story  you know a lover want to confess or something like that , but in the next lines I saw something different

I want to now the idea of this poem..!!

Thanks for your nice work..

انسانة فضولية

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I found in it a love story you know a lover want to confess or something like that , but in the next lines I saw something different

you can say that it started  so ,

but really it came to another .. direction .. since my thought turned the other way round ,,,,

   


Got it ??


thx alot being here ,,


regards ,,,,

Going round .. can not see an end
my soul's pangs .. do not seem to mend

To repentance .. words are easy to say
yet .. still stumbling ..  can not find my way

Shedding .. tears .. of my awakening guilt
God maintain .. what in a whole life I built

To God  .. I repent ..  what I did once
No fake  , no lie now.. could stand in defence

........

Bassel

accept my words inspired from yours and my own soul..

what you wrote just came on right time !! beautifully written as usual!!

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Now confession should be a superior
No matter ,, were you a weak ,, or a warrior

I'm sure you read alot of English poetry apart from University courses
!!coz it seems you organize your words easly in an impressive way

thanks alot
always waiting for more

my best wishes
 
Judy

peace upon u

it's been a long time since the last poem i read ..

i felt very blue while reading ..

words .. rhymes are very very very neat .. simple and simply nice ...

but i wish if that was not written and agreed by two of my best friends ..

for u Bassel

the beauty of your soul smiling is never comparable with your poem !!

judy 

come on .. i'm really getting annoyed about you ...

best wishes ..

regards

Alyazan

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judy 

come on .. i'm really getting annoyed about you ...

now I am annoyed too  !! >>> just do not be yazan

you absolutely know that in poetry you can fake reality and be imaginative

well .. in these lines I wrote .. I did not

these were one of the most sincere words I write

anyway .. the general theme we are talking about is not that sad
it is remorse .. and there is something positive in that .. don't you think ??

accept my best wishes