I don’t know what you want me to be
For God sake let  me be free

Let me have my way
And in my life to have a say

With you I should always agree
Cause it is the best for me as you see

Please try to hear me for once
And don’t reject every thing at once

I admire  what you have done
As parents to your son

But I can’t be a copy of you
Being myself is not entering  the taboo

You will have all my love and respect
But my own decision you should accept
     

Hey Merna


a nice poem as usual derived from our every day concerns and issues

I like the simplicity in your words and the easy way through which you express universal topics


keep it up

best wishes

Merna ,,,,,


Generation Gap ,,,,,


it's a nice name ,,,, for your poem ,,,,

you choose , ,,, a very  nice words ,,,,,,


a very beautiful ,,,, meaning ,,,,,



God ma rewrd you ,,,,,





wish you the  best ,,,,,,




REGARDS ,,,,,

Dear Merna

you really remind me of what I used to write

when I read your poem I felt like I was the one who wrote it

I liked the way you expressed your feeling

so simple...but also so meaningful

go on...and keep writing like that

Best wishes

JUDY ,NIGHTRIDER,WHITE JASMINE
Iam glad to know that you liked the idea and the poem your words mean a lot to me

JUDY ,NIGHTRIDER,WHITE JASMINE
Iam glad to know that you liked the idea and the poem your words mean a lot to me