Almighty God
If you can forgive me
Please, don’t ever let me

I know my way by your light
My soul to you soon will flight
Look after me in my plight
Though I haven'’t done anything right

regret sins I have done
Which I said and that I forgot
I wish if icould turn them all around
If ican for sole night sleep sound

Torture me ‘hurt me
iDeserve more than that
But don’t ever hate me
I can’t stand living in that

I rebelled against your orders
mySins are heavy load upon my shoulder
I hope that one day you will call me
And from that load you will relieve me

I’m sincere please believe me
I know it might be hard to trust a liar like me
 

alsalam alycom
I think there are something wrong
or i do not understand something

اقتباس

If you can forgive me

are you speak to Allah and sey ( if you can)???/

اقتباس

Torture me ‘hurt me
Deserve more than that
But don’t ever hate me

and that is not right we can,t say to Allahe torture me that is wrong

اقتباس

I rebelled against your orders
Sins are heavy load upon my shoulder
I hope that one day you will call me
And from that load you will relieve me

and that too how will Allah relive you from his order

may i dontunderstand  please explian

أبو فاطمة

First thanks a lot for commenting on the topic.

I did not mean when I say if you can forgive that I have doubt in God mercy but that I am not sure if my sins are from the kinds that can  be forgiven.

When you commit mistake at least you have to endure the punishment bravely and I ask my God to punish me in the mundane life because  it will be easier from the punishment in the after life.
And the load imean it is my sins .it is not god order

I wish that my explanation will satisfy you
And I apologize if something has disturbed you
 

ok I think your explain may be enough but i steal not agree whith you
any way thanks for youe care
ابو فاطمة

Hello Merna


Your words are very sincere and beautiful
we easily can feel the honesty and pure wishes deep within


thanks for sharing the poem with us


I wanna just make a small remark on one tiny thing

it is wrong to write **god

since you believe in one god >> you should write the first letter in capital

God

that's why I edited the way you wrote it to the correct form


accept my best wishes

Thanks a lot JUDY
Your words always motivate me and push me to go on.  I am so grateful to you foryour support 

And I promise you that next time    I will take  heed of capitalization cause the name of deity should be in capital letter thanks for your correction .