thanks so much for this lovely poem

ZAID

I appreciate your opinion very much
 
thanks for being here

Best wishes

peace upon u

i've read this and i was wondering what dream could it be ??

i found it just a stear deeply inside the soul of everyone of us .. it's simply life .. the biggest dream we all live ...

your poem is full of meanings but it have no sweet rythem

best wishes

The world sometimes betray us when we want to talk about something we liked
  It is  great poem written by great one like you
And  would you  please accept this words from me


The dream is the sky    line for our hope

Is the land where we with our secrets  elope
Is the pouch where we hide our desire
Every night we to this wonder land aspire
But with the sunrise we descend
To walk on the life  tough trend
To tire our eyes by looking to this false figure
To rub over the bitterness  of the life some sugar
To lie at ourselves and cheat the others
To make the true nature  under thick covers

My dear friend dody

I was very happy to read your poem !!
.. I really liked it and for sure I accept it

thanks alot for your nice and encouraging words

accept my best wishes
 

Alyazan

This dream is the illusion you have of life before knowing what it is really about

once you see the ugly side of the coin, you know that you were only dreaming

and thinking that maybe you are living in some kind of UTOPIA!!


I was glad to see you here ...

and I will make sure next time that my poem has a sweet rythem ..

so anybody wishing to sing it will be able to do so

my best wishes

Dear Merna

really thanx sooo much for the nice words you said
I appreciate your opinion a lot

wow ! you have said it right

It is really honoring to have your beautiful words here

thanks again and best wishes