Dear Judy….


Your words were really impressive
I really appreciate what you’ve said


But that somebody who was always there has gone

And now I ‘m alone again and I have no one

this time nothing again will be done

And in my life I can’t see this shiny sun

I always thought I found my love’s son

So this time I woke up and saw what’s going on

And I realized that everything just has gone


Best wishes

Even if that sombody is gone, people come and go
have faith what is to come is better than you know

this time and every time many things can be done
tender hearts you will find, and surely  more than one

believe me no matter how ugly it seems
still you can find beauty beyond all means

If an old one is gone, no need to lose your hope
new friends around you will help you to cope

My Dearest friend Jasmine, I am very happy by the way you
responded to my words... it's a nice way to converse by rhymes

Accept my passing by again
Judy>>>
   

Dear Judy..... Really gald to see your replay here again


but you're still talking about hope
and about friends would help me to cope

as you forgot about these world
and you missed all my past words

trust is a really problem to me
casue after all the reality I see
no more disloyal peolpe in my life there'll be


Thanx againg for your passing....and it's really a nice way to converse by rhymes

What a wonderful things i can see in ur page
as i am just start to know about my age

ahhahahahha
i tried to make like you
realy i was so happy to see ur words
the 2
Jasmine&Judy


again complete it
so nice things to be done here
so  wisdomful words

عاشق عبير الشام

Don't you ever give up of trying
cause in this world we can all flying

beyond all of the lines we're writing
I found beautiful words in your writing

just try again and I know that you can
just express about your inner man

I hope my words will encourage you to write somthing, cause I know that you can.... just try.... and I'll wait to see somthing soon from you

with my Best wishes