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White Jasmine

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Fourth Story….. Life Is Short

15-07-2008 05:17 PM




Fourth Story….. Life Is Short


He was at the bar that night drinking with some friends… he used to be so careless and negligible … he always had arguments with his father and he used to complain of everything in his life….
When he backed to his home, he was drunk…his father was waiting for him and when he saw him he said “where were you??? “….but the boy’s answer was” having fun” …. The father felt so sad about his only child and said” Son… I’m really worried about you… you know… Life is short, don’t waste it like this…. Find a job and start working… then you’ll get married…. I can’t wait to see your children surrounding me”… the Son laughed and said” life is short for you but not for me…. I wanna live my life as the way I like… just be out of it”….. Of course after that they had a big fight and the son went out of his home after he decided that he wouldn’t come back again….
He spent days and months with his bad friends… but one day –after all of them took a heroin potion- two of his friends had a crazy fight and killed each other without any reason… so he escaped and left them….
And After days of straying… he sat alone and thought about what his father said… he thought very deep and discerned that his father was right…. He decided to go home again and ask his father for forgiveness… he wanted to tell him that he was very wrong and he wouldn’t ever be useless anymore…. He slept that night and dreamed about what he wanted to say in the next day…
At The next day… he ran toward his home…. He was very happy and hopeful…. But when he reached to his building he found a white paper on the wall… he took few steps closer to read it… it was a death notice… it was his father… he lost his mind and started yelling so loudly…. He couldn’t imagine that …. And he knew that he took a lot of time to come back home again… and he understood the meaning of “ Life Is short”….and knew that he should woke up to the reality earlier….


Life is short….So don’t you ever waste it….use it for your best, and enjoy every second of it…

15/7/2008

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رد مشاركة : Short Stories

18-07-2008 01:01 AM




hi
White Jasmine
Your story is really GOOD

and I like you're courage
cause you know it's just a foreign language

one thing remains
I noticed something
and I wish you accept my criticism
as a literary one

I noticed you didn't give a space for the rhetorical methods
I know it's not an important thing for writing ashort story

but I mean it takes a didactic way
and the advice is very very abvious

again

and again

and again



it's a very very very nice


thank YOU
please don't take it personally

really I like it

and this for you only




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رد مشاركة : Short Stories

18-07-2008 05:43 PM




Dear Pledge….
It’s my pleasure to read your criticism here….
And I won’t ever take it personally…

But you know what???....
I want the advice to be so clear to everyone…
Not also this… I always write in a simple way to help everyone to understand what I want

And you said the right thing…I know it's not an important thing for writing a short story

You know… the rhetorical methods always used in novels and narrations
When you have a long story with so many actions to tell….

Any way…
I’m really glad cause you liked the story…
And I’d like to read your opinion in each story I’ll add later..

Best Regards…





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رد مشاركة : Short Stories

23-07-2008 10:36 PM




wooooooooooooow

It's nice story

God reward you my friend

White Jasmine





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*Judy*

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Little Ammy

28-07-2008 07:24 AM




Fifth story .... Little Ammy


A little girl named Ammy grew up happily exploring life through her innocent eyes.
She saw beauty in every sight,
She heard honesty in every word, and she saw people as angels with no faults ….

When she one day launched into life by her own, she began to see the real picture
And to realize the ugly truth…
Roses have thorns ..
Truths are lies …
And people are full with  flaws …


At the same time , she learned that each coin has two sides that need to be seen,
And that a bird  can not fly with only one wing.

So although roses have thorns, Ammy learned to give attention to its smell and view.
Although truths are lies, she learned to never stop searching for truth no matter how
Many lies she will face.
And Although people are full with flaws, Ammy learned that they are also full with passion, will and good….

27- 7- 2008                          11: 55 pm


   




You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful, you're leaving me breathless

And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I'm thankful for the life we've made

.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..



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White Jasmine

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Sixth Story…. The Final Journey

30-07-2008 07:06 PM




Sixth Story…. The Final Journey


He always comes here every night… she doesn’t know why he feels that he belongs here… but that doesn’t matter, cause she becomes so happy every time she sees him….
And she believes that her grandfather always was the closest person to her although she didn’t know him a lot… but she always thankful cause he never leaves her alone….
She misses him a lot each day, and she wants to be with him all the time cause he’s the only one who can understand her quite well…. And she recognizes that day will come, sooner or later, that day will come when they’ll be together…and everything will be alright….
That’s why each night she goes to sleep and dreams about the day when he’ll come and take her away beyond the skies, the clouds, and the seas to start her endless journey of life….

30/7/2008

Judy... what you wrote is really amazing.....thank's for your sharing

Mjood.... thank's for your passing




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رد مشاركة : Short Stories

05-08-2008 01:05 AM




White Jasmine
They are really very beautiful stories I liked them very much
Best wishes for you
Do7a





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Seventh Story…. The Story of True Love

08-08-2008 01:48 PM




Seventh Story…. The Story of True Love


They didn’t know how the destiny grouped them together, but it didn’t matter as long as they felt glad each time they saw each other…. At first they thought that they were just friends and they were satisfied with that… until he wrote her a surprising message …. When he was reading it to her , she got dizzy, but it was an amazing feeling , not a bad one…..she didn’t know what to say, she was speechless , but she thought that her eyes told him about her emotions silently….

Until now she still remembers his smile when he told her that he truly loves her…. But she doesn’t know what to do… but there’s one thing in her mind and she thinks it’s the best solution for both of them… she’s gonna sacrifice with her true feelings…. She’s gonna sacrifice with her heart, her tears and her soul, and she’ll tell him that they can’t be friends anymore because that will hurt them really bad in the future…. That’s what she calls a true Love….

8/8/2008              3:59 pm


Thank's Do7a for your nice replay.... Best Regards




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I am Unwritten,
Can't read my mind
I'm Undefined

I'm just Beginning
The pen's in my hand
Ending Unplanned

and Today is where my Book Begins
so The Rest is still Unwritten





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Eighth Story.... Forgive me Mother

09-08-2008 12:04 PM




Eighth Story.... Forgive me Mother


"Come on! Can't you see I am busy?" Marcus yelled at his mother.
"Yes I can. But I can't go to your sister's house alone" said the mother with
tears starting to fill her eyes.
"Tomorrow you will go visiting my sister, but today I am sorry!!" he insisted.
"You are sorry?!" said the mother hurt again.
"Yes I am sorry; I have got an appointment in about two hours and I got to prepare for it. Then I promised Dena I will meet her at her parents'"

At hearing this, the mother kept silenced and murmured in a barely audible
Voice, "Yes, go my dear, truly your fiancé is more important"



After three hours, Marcus went out of The Meetings office extremely happy, for he
was able to achieve a huge success and completed the deal.
while he was in his way to meet Dena, his phone rang.

"Hello, this is Marcus", He answered.
"Sir, I am sorry to inform you that your mother had a heart attack,
and now she is in the hospital", the voice in the phone said.
"What? ..How..? Why..? I'll be right over… But how is she?"
Marcus said without giving the man any chance to respond.
"Sir, I am really sorry!!"
"You are sorry?!" Marcus repeated the man's words unconsciously
while tears ran over his face as fountains…

9-8-2008    01:00 pm

Best Wishes

 




You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful, you're leaving me breathless

And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I'm thankful for the life we've made

.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..



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رد مشاركة : Short Stories

09-08-2008 01:16 PM





اقتباس
Seventh Story…. The Story of True Love




Now  I m really " dizzy " …  can't know … from where I can bring the suitable words to express my feelings ….  My hands are trembling ….  I hardly can find the letters n the keyboard ….  … my eyes r wetting … and my heart s weeping ….
I wont surrender to the silence ….
Few days ago … I wrote something about chaos and unconsciousness … but now … I m living this unconsciousness … I m thinking unconsciously  , writing unconsciously  …  …
Have u ever thought  that reading  a poem or a short story can change ur life … have u ever thought  that somewhere unexpected  … without any date … you  u ll meet  your own  destiny …

Your story hasn't made me surprised … but t 's made me realized that as ur short story can sacrifice .. my story can do that too …

White jasmine … your story s influenced me …
It has been long time since I read something influenced me like this story …


wish u all the best my sister



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