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.It's Time We Awake


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It's Time We Awake

12-08-2008 05:23 PM



It's Time We Awake



Have you ever been to the land of dreams
Where no rules confine your being,
And no time limits your freedom?

Have you ever seen the shinning gleams
Of hopeful minds right before your seeing
Or  at least heard of some?

That land I have visited
And that light I have seen

Right there the world was living in peace
Joyful, nothing could drive their happiness to cease

No greed, hatred, or treachery was able to disfigure that scene

Right their ugly wars were not launched because of trifle matters
Sweet houses were not bombed and transferred into shatters

Right their families were not thrown out and made homeless
Innocent children were not killed, injured or left parentless

Cries and wailings were never heard
No tears were seen …No sad expressions
No funerals every hour …No scary  visions

No pools of blood … No broken toys
No rains of fire … No warplane noise


Life there was beautiful and fair
While here, it's nothing but a nightmare

That will continue…
Until you realize what stands on stake
And give those sleepy a powerful shake
And say with loud voice..
" It's time we awake"

11-9-2008                09:45  pm

Judy    





You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful, you're leaving me breathless

And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I'm thankful for the life we've made
.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..



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رد مشاركة : It's Time We Awake

12-08-2008 08:42 PM



Good evening

I liked your own world; I liked your Utopia.

But who shall bear this business, for building it.

I assure you, the people that you've mentioned will remain

Dead even if the most awaken shocks came to them, they will refuse;

Rather prefer to still dumb.

They like what they call, our beautiful world.

Anyways, I do not know whether that world of peace came from your

Fancy, or came from a real life.

But I think that it was illusionary, since our custom these days is:

"The blood is dropping like water dew,
Yet we mark kill, while from it pooh."
(SILVER © 2008-08-12)

I found two strong lines in your poem, and to be frank,

They touched My Mind:

No pools of blood … No broken toys
No rains of fire … No warplane noise

I wish to live in such kind of life, but who knows…?

These two lines Miss, the strongest lines in your poem,

They reflect a lot of things; maybe I will mention them later.

Finally, I appreciate your writing My dear friend.

Best wishes



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رد مشاركة : It's Time We Awake

13-08-2008 10:19 AM



Dear Judy :

what you have written  about this imaginary world stills imagination

or dreams and it seems impossible to  exist in our life

It's not a pessimistic  point of view , but this is the reality that we

cannot deny..

Those wicked people fill the world with harm and injury …

But as you said :

        And give those sleepy a powerful shake


The others are sleepy , , or they blinded their eyes to the truth …

And as My dear Silver said :


اقتباس
I assure you, the people that you've mentioned will remain

Dead even if the most awaken shocks came to them, they will refuse;

Rather prefer to still dumb
.

But why ?

And this is the question that has no answer ..



  No greed, hatred, or treachery was able to disfigure that scene

Judy , you know what ?

This line remind me of only one world , where all these criteria can

come altogether  :

It's the Paradise ..

Listen what the Almighty God says in the Holy Quran :

((و نزعنا ما في صدورهم من غل إخوانا على سرر متقابلين ))

((و نزعنا ما في صدورهم من غل تجري من تحتهم الأنهار))

But here , in this life it's very difficult to clean people's chest from

such things..

Why ? I do not know..

                              Thanks a lot Judy ..

                          And waiting for more..

Best Wishes                                 
 

                                                 





" كل الناس يغدو فبائع ٌ نفسه فمعتقها أو موبقها"


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رد مشاركة : It's Time We Awake

13-08-2008 11:39 AM



Silver

I am honestly very happy to read your comment on my poem
To me the poem completes only  when it's discussed

When I wrote the poem I was not thinking of a utopia
rather I was thinking of a world that at the least
would not have these ugly pictures in it
not a utopia but also not a nigtmare


Again as you said this peaceful world is imaginary
but I am hopeful that this dream would come true one day


اقتباس
"The blood is dropping like water dew,
Yet we mark kill, while from it pooh."

this is a very painful image, yet it is reality

anyway the lines you described as powerful
somehow deliver the most important message I wanted from this poem

I intentionly chose to describe this fair world by describing
its opposite.... I think by this it will be more effective

Finally, I am truly honuored by your response my friend





You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful, you're leaving me breathless

And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I'm thankful for the life we've made
.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..



  بحبك يا شـــام ! 


أنت غير مسجل لدينا.. يمكنك التسجيل الآن.

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*Judy*

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رد مشاركة : It's Time We Awake

13-08-2008 07:57 PM



Dear Safaa


اقتباس
It's not a pessimistic  point of view , but this is the reality that we

cannot deny..

I absolutely agree with you
Byt why not dreaming??
maybe we could change at least a small part  in this world


اقتباس
This line remind me of only one world , where all these criteria can

come altogether  :

It's the Paradise ..

I really liked the way you read this line

Thanx alot for ur comment my friend
I missed that

Regards



You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful, you're leaving me breathless

And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I'm thankful for the life we've made
.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..



  بحبك يا شـــام ! 


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رد مشاركة : It's Time We Awake

15-08-2008 01:25 PM



the first thing i want to thank u a bout your artical
2nd thing  i wsh to add my voice to your 's and to all people all over  the world to say " It's time we awake
but im sorry to tell u that in our life it is a hard job but we must be soldiers where we will not lose our compousre till we get our target which is to live in peace but alas when we can  feel peace not just  to me but to all people but eventhough  u begine a step and we will complete it another step will be thankx alot with all respect  "




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رد مشاركة : It's Time We Awake

16-08-2008 04:38 PM



Sniper

I thank you for your passing
and your nice comment
you are welcome



You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful, you're leaving me breathless

And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I'm thankful for the life we've made
.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..



  بحبك يا شـــام ! 


أنت غير مسجل لدينا.. يمكنك التسجيل الآن.
 








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